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RE: STORY IN FIFTY WORDS: SHADE

in #fiftywords7 years ago

I enjoyed this story, @kingspiration. I think it is true that those who have the least often appreciate what they have the most.

One suggestion for you: instead of “She smiled tearfully to himself,” it should be “He smiled tearfully to himself.”

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And thanks for drawing my attention to the error.You are very right @jayna. I think we will find more happiness when we appreciate the many pearls life places on our way.

You have the opportunity to edit the words if it is less than 7 days since you posted it. 😊

DONE! Thanks