This was great. I really felt like the first lines were all building up to this scene of carnage (which I was uncomfortable with). By the time I got to the line, "all this I could have imagined myself" I was sickened by the thought of so much gore. BLood and death make me squeamish.
Then the turn, the shock, the moment it sinks in as real and horrifying; "the smell."
Awesome. I have this itch in my spine, down my back to my tailbone like a worm trying to escape that is my discomfort from the grossness this image provoked.
Well done; thank you? Such great imagery that i'm completely grossed out by the scene in my head that you created.
Haha! I'm glad you...enjoyed it? ;) I love reading your comments, by the way. Thanks for always giving such awesome feedback!