The Secret

in #fiftywords6 years ago

Tears filled her eyes like clouds. He had just left the room to get something. Elizabeth was going through the drawer when she saw his fertility result. ''What!? Low sperm count!!!?''. Eight years of barrenness and she was seen as the bad egg. But, he fenced this secret all along.9k=.jpg Source: google.com

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Ouch! Is he in hot water, or what!?

Lovely succinct story, with lots of drama to unfold.

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That naughty guy! I wouldn't be surprised if that actually happens in real life. Who wants to admit they are the cause of a fertility problem? You captured so much in this little 50-word piece, @olakunle10. Nice work!

Thank you very much @jayna
But some men can still admit to the truth in real life...lol

An unusual application of the verb "to fence," for sure...
Interesting!

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Thank you so much @creatr
You've been a motivation