*** Suddenly, he found an iron rod, under his hand. He took a deep breath, inside the darkest room , he pick that up.
That killer himself taught him, its application, the exact hit nearby, occipital parts of brain. One hit and that's it...***
As, he stood, a knife run past his throat.., cutting it ...a little ... just as he ( killer) said.
A bit longer than 50 words, but it's a full story. Good work!
Thank you sir :), Story should be complete , as I think . Next time there will be a complete story, even more interesting !
That's what I am learning from my seniors !
Hi @saun. Thanks for participating in #fiftywords. I'm sorry I haven't responded. I have to recover my @jayna account, and currently am posting as @jaynas-minime.
There's a lot going on in this story. Wow! If you do another one of these, please do aim for the 50 word count guideline. That is what this challenge is about. It forces you to cut out any extra words and fine-tune your story, so that every word counts. This story is 100 words, which is twice as long as the challenge guidelines.
Here are a few tips for you:
Those are just a few examples of the edits you could make to reduce your word count to meet the challenge. Note: If you don't want to write a story in just 50 words, there are lots of other great writing challenges. Good luck!
Thank you mam ! For you opinion. I made this under fiftywords. And no far competition can be beautiful than this...