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RE: Short Fiction for Finish the Story Contest- A Thousand Windows

in #finishthestory6 years ago

You gave us a fantastic story that could have slipped into a search for vengeance or despair, instead turning it to a love story. His love, her life taken due to strict and unyielding codes, continuing to love Vartan and guide him after her death. All culminating in a quest that eschews the traditional grand show of heroism, asking instead for service and endurance for the sake of love.

Congratulations on your well-deserved Curie vote!

--Bris

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A fantastic start to the story helped. The hero needed quest, my first thought was -LOVE.

Thank You @bananafish The Force is strong in you. th.jpg

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