What a tragedy! I hope it actually wasn't his brother Danny :)
I've read another stories for this contest and yours is very different. It's dramatic and traumatic. It's something what I would expect to come out of this but others took different direction. I like that you were brave and came with such strong emotion and this tragedy.
Thank you for sharing! Have a nice day!
No it wasn't his brother, however the shock of seeing someone so similar made him feel guilty for not keeping in touch with Danny.
That is the great thing about #FinishTheStory, everyone gets inspired by the intro and manages to come up with something different.
Thank you for the complement :)