Paragraph 2, 1st sentence needs quotation marks if Bjarne is saying it and not merely thinking it. Thus it should read:
"I've also had it polished my love, let's see if it fits again."
Paragraph 2, 1st sentence needs quotation marks if Bjarne is saying it and not merely thinking it. Thus it should read:
"I've also had it polished my love, let's see if it fits again."