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The loss of their son, his wife saying farewell now after a long and painful sickbed,
I don't think sickbed is the proper word here. The word illness or the word battle would be more appropriate.
As this is the final comment I can make for this chapter, I'll also point out that quotation marks are missing from the conversational parts. That notwithstanding, this chapter appears to be much better written and has a lot fewer errors than the previous chapters.