I really like this. I find it very artistic and mythical. If I may make a suggestion, perhaps you might want to change the phrase "termed 'crazy'." to "called Crazy", 'Termed' is used for objects and processes, "called" is used for people and animals.
Other than that I really did enjoy it. I'm going to feature it in my Fiction Trail Update later today.
Advice heeded. Thank you very much!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yay! I'm really pumped!!