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RE: Wealth - A story written in five-ish minutes.

in #freewrite6 years ago

Awww this is so sweet, and unspools so beautifully. It manages to be from the perspective of the child, yet tells so much more about the grandfather, a man who maybe did not value things he once does now for his warning speaks not only of his concerns for a young mind, easily enchanted, but also hints at regret.

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Well damn, you're good at picking up subtle meanings. :p
Glad you enjoyed it. ^^