Freewrite : freedom

in #freewrite6 years ago

People talk of freedom, like they know what it is.
People seek for freedom, not knowing what it is.
In this world where nothing is free, how do you want that freedom.

Everything is commercial,
You feel like oxygen is free,
Every breath lead closer to death.

Eveyday something is exchanged
Sometimes our money
Sometimes our soul

We work for freedom
Freedom is
within our mind.

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woow really heart touching.

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I know that in the morning now.

Great Words And Beautifully Made Love it Keep It Up 👍👍

Marvelous poem @fleurinna. Have success always. I like it

thank you :) success to you too

Perasaan yang sama, saya juga merasakan itu.
Sebelumnya saya sependapat dengan anda tentang Minat baca orang Indinesia yang minim (uloq 11 )
Saya juga sempat menulis itu dalam postingan saya https://www.steemit.com/indonesia/@wiralhokseumawe/diary-16-apakah-pemerintah-harus-memberlakukan-hukuman-tembak-mati-di-tempat-bagi-siapa-saja-yang-tidak-membaca-buku-a06b1669a5842
Thanks @fleurinna
Salam kenal aja dan sukses selalu

Salam kenal juga, makasih ya udah interested buat baca tulisanku.
sekarang cuuss mau ke postinganya.

Sama-sama @fleurinna
Tulisanmu membuat saya terkesan
Saya suka kebebasan
Kebebasan yang tanpa di atur,juga di monopoli

Salam sahabat
Sukses selalu

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True Indeed! Nice post

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Good job! You should tag this with freewritepoetry so people can find you for the weekly contest. Thanks for the kryptonia task :)

thank you, I didn't know about that tag.

Keep up the good work.

Nice post@christiano199

Nice poem Kryptonia @richard78624

@amiohi kryptonia ID

upvoted from kryptonia with the same name.

Real nice at times i wonder if am alone on this page ... @fluerinna. No one is actually free we all victims of something

Like you are right. All the same, we just have to keep living, here is where we fund ourselves. Kryptonia @mrlopez

upvote for you, Kryptonia @ziggy

Your phrases are very true.
@rocaxel Id Kryptonia.

Very generous one. Lot of meaning is involved in the poem when the writer wrote this poem. kcherukuri from kryptonia.

yes freedom. I love freedom too. We must safeguard our freedom.

Sad to say that nothing's for free anymore except salvation. All we need to do is to trust and obey to our gracious heavenly father..

Güzel bir paylaşım. @maonx

Good poem :)

Great words !!!!!

nice post :) Just keep up the good work @fleurinna.

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I really like this piece. Nothing is actually free in this world.

nice writing maam.

Wow that is really inspiration well done!

Upvote you in kryptonia@CEARrtou66
Where is happiness? It is in your heart.
When taking money home:
When you give money to your wife and children, I think in my heart: I have been busy for 1 month, I have been doing it for 12 hours a day, I have to die, I am all gone, then you are suffering; but when you think about your wife and children, I should In the effort, earn more money, taking care of your wife and children is my happiness...

Thanks for sharing this post upvoted from kryptonia @omobolaji

nice
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nice post :) upvote by @anne0130 kryptonia

Güzel bir paylaşım. Elinize sağlık

Upvoted your nice post. From kryptonia @grace234

What ever you do everything is billed by someone else.

Fantastic piece of writing. Hope to see a lot more.

Interesting poem, thanks for sharing and for the task, greetings.

Excelentes palabras, Kryptonia ID Mariale

Great short poem. I have never wrote any poem....