Dear @owasco,
That must really be a hard time for you. Honestly, what touched me so much was this:
please sorrow
loosen your grip
on my breath
No one deserves to feel the pain, all their hopes dashed and, generally feel sad. But, that is the reality of life and, we really do not have any choice but to go on with it...........
There's nothing like a haiku to get to the heart of any matter. I love writing them. thanks for letting it touch you.