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RE: Day 606: 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: nap

in #freewrite5 years ago

This time some poetry. I could not think out something else as I read what nap also means. https://partiko.app/wakeupkitty/alpha-kw-8-appics-im-25331?referrer=wakeupkitty

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I like your poem and I like your interrpretation of nap. Well done!

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment it.

I think if I used the word the way we all know it the story would have been less interesting.

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You were correct in your usage. There is Nap on carpet.

This was so beautiful... so sad, and yet so beautiful ... the lonely desire for perfection, and a friendship with the only one who can help that desire to be achieved...

@wakeupkitty nice poem

Thank you. It just popped up in my mind. 😃

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