Interesting premise. I'd love to read more of the story. This one seemed to jump around a bit, but other than me not being sure where the action was taking place all the time, I really enjoyed reading it. You have a gift for character building.
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Yes, I like to jump about a bit! It will need a good edit when I've finished, which might make it a bit clearer :) thanks for reading and commenting :)
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Well, I certainly look forward to reading all about the exploits of Tiny and his deceased wifey. :-)