Good day @adsactly. I would like to have a some opinion about my wife's story,
https://steemit.com/story-mentor/@thidaratapple/the-house-hut-introduction-part-1
She's a Thai National and having a bad time writing English stories but, she keeps on doing it. I would like to help her but she told me that she wanted to be her original story.
I'm not asking for upvotes instead I would like to know some comments about her writing. Writing stories is not my genre, honestly speaking so, I commented here as minnow of ADSactly for a little help and some advice for her story if you don't mind.
Thank you in advance @adsactly! More power!