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RE: A Day In the Life Contest 2040 - The Reader

BEAUTIFUL story - line after memorable line is vivid, haunting -
this! - a whisper of me left, buried under the blue ice of the waterfall, murmuring my soft lark song -
Powerful, hard-hitting, rich with historical references -
I cannot come up with enough good things to say to do it justice!
wow!
This is one of your best stories yet, and they've all been superb!

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Thank you so much @carolkean.... I'm actually somewhat happy with this one. Not my usual state of being.