I kinda liked this write-up, except the application of Sith (as bad) vs Jedi (as good) then wrapping it up saying, "To keep putting off what you want to achieve only takes you away from the life you want to live. Choosing you is now" is awkward. Putting off what you want to achieve would be a Jedi thing to do (aka, eschewing aspirations) and "choosing you" would be a Sith thing.
Choosing to follow your own path/aspirations is paramount to the sovereignty of all people as individuals, but sacrificing yourself for others is at least equally important.