The sun sets
over Southern California,
surfers line the water
like Canadian Geese
in V formation
The moon is but a pinprick
over the horizon
The tide rolls in
Better move those towels
to higher ground!
Peace
At one
with nature
The sun sets
over Southern California,
surfers line the water
like Canadian Geese
in V formation
The moon is but a pinprick
over the horizon
The tide rolls in
Better move those towels
to higher ground!
Peace
At one
with nature
Sweet pic and nice poem...quality share. Keep Steemin!
Thanks, @jdwolicki! It's my first day here, it's nice to have a positive response.
Just reading your short poem and looking at that beautiful picture has given me such calm in my soul. I love it
Thank you for your kind words, @solomonsel. You're invited to look at it any time you like :)
I sure will😀thank you
I can't believe that I actually read 2 pieces of poetry and loved both - yours and Solomon's. Very different feeling from each one. Yours just generates a marvelous feeling of peace - especially the line 'the moon is but a pinprick over the horizon.' Great description.
Thank you, @katebenzin, I am very glad you liked it. It took me a while to realize that the little dot to the left of the sun actually was the moon. At first, I thought it was a lens flare. It's the first time I've ever published poetry, and I'm so glad it made you feel peaceful. That's how I felt writing it.