Okay, I'm glad that you did this exercise. I try to do It too and it's important since writing is all about communication. Sometimes I prefer to write not so differently from how I speak, as long as the content is there. Words are just a medium for content, in the end. I'm also glad that you didn't take my observation bad, you know that for me sincerity is the best way to honor someone's effort.
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You guys are both so much braver than me, asking your real life friends for critical feedback, jeez I find confessing that I write for fun scary!!!
*human beings ;)
Have a lot of respect for both you guys and, the guts you both have to seek out feedback and take it on board instead of getting upset like I do haha <3<3
Hah, the most embarrassing moments come from haiku more than from prose. People simply don't understand this poetry.. but I've also to add that when a haiku is well crafted (those rare times, happened to me not more than three times so far) they appreciate. Cal, don't be so shy to proclaim your passion for writing to the world!
I fall flat on my face far too often to say anything that might convince people to watch that ;)
Wahhh cmon! What does John say?
Normally something about bears haha
I find it appropriate.
Slurrrppp!
~Glad we're having this kind of discussion~
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Well I write how I wish to jester in a court and communicate cleanly if I wish to drive my dialectic-rhetoric home, so sorry for my individual-being being a splitting contradiction (much like some authors) :p