Wow... !!! I don't know much about music rhythm, but the truth is you tried a lot. There are some parts I can never sing, like where you strained your voice. If I try it, my throat will collapse like the ancient wall of Jericho.
With just a little work on your voice, you would nail it. Hope to see more from you here. Namaste.
Life is a journey dear. Keep doing it if you have passion for it. Well done!
Wow... !!! I don't know much about music rhythm, but the truth is you tried a lot. There are some parts I can never sing, like where you strained your voice. If I try it, my throat will collapse like the ancient wall of Jericho.
With just a little work on your voice, you would nail it. Hope to see more from you here. Namaste.