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RE: Resentment; The enemy of love

in Emotions & Feelings2 years ago (edited)

When I started reading, I thought it's just a bunch of definitions. I most like to read personal stories. Which starts from:

I was hurt by my friends

Try to use ## heading or with ###

It will endup like

heading

Now your readers will get a better idea that it includes personal story much quicker. Also, your story telling needs alot of improvement but that's just my opinion.

This post/personal story reminded me when i was in 11th in college. I did all the lab task in group of 5 and he said to professor that I didn't in the group and all 4 did. When the professor left, His face was red from trying to catch a breath (something which I had done, two fingers 🤞 like snakes similar shape on his neck. I unintentionally did it. Also, non in college knew my aggression. I even said sorry immediately.) and he still don't mess with me. Not a good moral to teach but still that's my story.

Also, how is your job going? Anything new to share about it? Working envoirnment? Experience? Try worklife community. I would like to read more about job update. We remember how we worked on building your character slowly and boosting your confidence. I was most happiest when I read about your job.

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Thank you to give the suggestion, Next time, I will improve it. Your way of teaching(even without asking🤭)is really helpful.
Thank you for your appreciation and for building confidence.
Of course, when friends cheat, aggression is a natural behaviour which appear as a first action.
And my job is going well, I am teaching in a school(from where I have read) Also I am giving tuition classes. All is good for me because these are the first steps I took in my professional life.
But I can't leave hive(although sometimes I totally become inactive😊😊)
I am not here for earning fame but I love to write, that why I start again if I am very busy in my life.
Thank you for your kind words🤗🤗