You sing really well. In fact beautifully! But you forgot to say hello Hive Openmic, the song you are singing, and your username at the beginning of the song.
You should also leave time to visit other content in the Hive Open Mic community and engage with them. You would learn from their entries as well.
It was really nice listening to you by the way.
Alright sir thank you so much for the corrections sir🤭🤭🤭