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RE: Make Like A Leaf

#crows are back - and that breath of fresh air you always bring!

Tip back in a garden chair so far you see nothing but sky
so far your heart skips a beat
so far a spark of the infinite
gasps
and your breath is as a flock of crows
quickening to take flight
one flap to be free

Tip back so far that a spark of the infinite gasps--how do you dream up such great lines?

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Pretty good right?! I went outside and did all those things. Those are the steps. Go see for yourself.