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RE: A Place Like Home. (An Original Poetry)

in The LIFESTYLE LOUNGE5 years ago

I wish Nigeria is more of the way you described your country.

Not that good at poems or poetry but it is worth the try.

A place like home
The prefect place to think
The prefect place to love
The perfect place to have a family

A place like home
Always come with peace of mind
Always come with comfortability
Always come with satisfaction

A place like home
Is a place free of injustice
Is a place free of corruption
Is a place I would love to call my country.

Hope I tried bro


Bro, I have not been seeing you on WhatsApp. Hope all is well?

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Well it's more like a place, an imaginary place where one feels at home, we all know it can't be Nigeria but then we all have that place we can generally call home.
Your attempt is good man, generally its difficult to write poetry