Well done on your first BTC buy! 💪🏼 And welcome to Hive 😁
Now, as this is one of the first posts you've done, I actually think it's pretty good. I'm pretty sure you will improve your writing skills quickly 😃
I just checked your posts and noticed you have posted some multiple times. I totally understand why you would because the posts can be posted in more communities, like on reddit. But here on Hive, I would strongly recommend to only post it 1 time. You can then add tags, cross-post to other communities, etc.
You will get there 💯
!BBH !hiqvote
The easiest way is to use peakd.com.
It has cross-post feature from the dotted menu at the end.
The structure here is somewhat the same as reddit when it comes to posts.
I'd say, maybe you can read a few posts on reddit, get inspiration, and then do posts that are in the same style as the ones on reddit 😃
!BBH