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RE: Burned Down

in Reflections5 months ago

Are we doing what is required for a stronger, healthier society - or are we improving the status quo system - the one that is failing?

I'd like to think that my work as a teacher is helping society forward, but outside of teaching hours I don't treat myself with the same courtesy. I've been most stagnant the past 3 years. Sure I'm building connections in the music world and going to more shows for coverage.

But after 5 years writing about music and events, I still don't have a very active consumer base for my written material. People would rather see Toks and Reels than be forced to read prose. The silly little AI editor always tells me I write too advanced for the ordinary reader. Too many sentences over 20 words, too many sophisticated words.

Am I turning off the average EDM lover with articles that are too advanced for their thinking. I sure hope not, because I've never felt that dumbing things down is a benefit to the general audience. Maybe I am expecting too much from my target audience, but so it is. Hope you enjoy the read at moonlvnding dot com!

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Too many sentences over 20 words, too many sophisticated words.

People are idiots these days, and getting stupider. Many think it is fine because it makes money - but it degrades society,

Yeah, I don't care about getting that green smiley face from the AI. Elevated content from Moon Lvnding!