Hi, @minismallholding.
Wow! How did I manage to miss the debut of this story?
To be honest, I’m not usually a big reader of this kind of fantasy—I prefer speculative fiction—but this is undoubtedly a well-balanced work; so much so that it shines and captivates even in the Spanish machine translation. I loved it, and I will certainly be reading the next installment.
Greetings.
The debut The Return of Elderfine was 6 years ago, so it was easily missed. 😉 😆 It was actually @lordnigel who started the ball rolling, so it was more his thing than mine, but I thought I'd challenge myself to see if I could continue it. I don't think he was really sure how to continue it himself, which was why he left it at that point.
Wow! I’ve also started fiction projects that I ended up putting on hold for one reason or another—like a novel-in-installments that ultimately turned into a short story. Haha. But I’ve never set out to continue someone else’s unfinished work. In any case, I like your writing style in this regard.