Good one. The message is clear
In spite of that, I continue my throbbing
waterlogged path until I reach the top of the sky.
Moral lesson - we need to be
courageous and doggedd.
Thanks for sharing this.
Quick advice - next time I think it'll be nicer if you put an English translation So other people who don't understand your language can relate too. It saves them the stress of going to translate it
Thanks for the comment. I will try to translate my next poems, though sometimes is difficult to translate poetry because something is missing in the way. But I try in my next write.
I appreciate so much your comment, and I am Happy that this poem is your liking.
Thanks