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RE: The kiss of discord || El beso de la discordia [ING/ESP]

in Writing Club2 years ago

It’s heartbreaking to love someone so much and give your all in a relationship while the other doesn’t give back. I’m glad Sher left though. It’s better than just letting it go on.

The feeling of being inadequate is real. You captured it beautiful in this piece. I could literally feel what the main character felt.

Keep writing @marysenpai. This was nicely done!