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RE: THE PERFECT ONE (story). [ENG / ESP] || EL PERFECTO (cuento). [ENG / ESP]

in Writing Club2 years ago

Bravo!, Very nice story.
I really like the way you described the character Betty, it made me begin to love her too, I could easily picture how beautiful she is in my heart.

I also like the twist at the end, Indeed there is no perfect person and we really need to take our time and research before making decisions.

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Thanks for stopping by. I am glad you enjoyed the story