Una Penumbra en tu Voz | A Penumbra in your Voice / Poema

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Una Penumbra en tu Voz

La penumbra de tu voz,
revela con horror
un pasado ennegrecido,
que le ha oprimido,
por haber bendecido
lágrimas de cirios,
sin haberlo vivido.

Te sostuvo la confianza,
fue vencida y abatida
por sinceras mentiras,
ausentes de verdades,
en laberintos de maldades.

Engulle tus amarguras e invitas
a un pasado envejecido;
has buscado la paz ,
en los reflejos de la verdad;
has buscado la paz,
sobre turbios estanques de falsas hadas,
revueltos por los soplos de la soledad,
mientras tú piel,
exuda con desdén,
los miasmas de un harem.

Has permitido al desistir,
que los aullidos del bosque
apabullen las voces del existir;
has ahogado
con el légamo del arrepentir
todo vestigio por vivir;
ni con cien años de llantos,
jamás lo podrás desmentir.

Tommy Ed

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A Penumbra in your Voice

The penumbra of your voice,
reveals with horror,
a blackened past,
that has oppressed you,
for having blessed
tears of candles,
without having lived.

Confidence held you up,
was defeated and beaten
by sincere lies,
absent of truths,
in labyrinths of wickedness.

You swallow your bitterness and invite
an aged past;
you have sought peace,
in the reflections of truth;
you have sought peace,
on murky ponds of false fairies,
stirred by the breaths of loneliness,
while your skin,
oozes with disdain,
the miasma of a harem.

You have allowed, by giving up,
the howls of the forest
to overpower the voices of existence;
you have drowned
with the muck of regret
all traces of living;
not even with a hundred years of weeping,
can you ever deny it.

Tommy Ed

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Gran inspiración has seleccionado palabras realmente profundas con esa tilde misteriosa y existencial. Bien hecho @tommy27

Muchas gracias, aprecio tus palabras 🌟

Un buen poema que habla de las mentiras que se conocían, pero con comprensión, las mentiras se apartaron para que reinara la paz.

Gracias por tu comentario y aprecio🌞

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