Feelings into words: The Abandoned Car [ENG/SPA]

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El Auto Abandonado



Al principio de aquella noche se olía el pecado
un joven de su casa se había escapado
salió por la ventana del cuarto del lavado
se fue en busca de alguien de su triste pasado.


Mientras andaba se fijó en un auto que parecía abandonado,
estaba en medio de la calle y no aparcado
el joven se acercó curioso pero con sigilo, estaba agachado
se sobresaltó al ver una mujer ensangrentada aún con el cinturón abrochado.


El auto era muy anticuado
uno de los cauchos estaba abollado
la puerta del conductor estaba hacia un lado
todo era muy sospechoso, yo no me habría acercado.


El joven estaba realmente asustado
mantuvo su distancia a la sangre no estaba acostumbrado
el cuerpo estaba inmóvil como apagado
pero el joven indeciso no se acercaba se encontraba muy aterrado.


Reunió el valor y se acercó con mucho cuidado,
con manos temblorosas desabrochó
el cinturón que estaba muy ajustado,
acto seguido se llevó las manos a la boca alarmado
al ver un puñal bañado en sangre y muy afilado.


El joven estaba sudando a chorros angustiado
debía buscar por todos lados
la herida que le habían causado
intentaría ayudarla aunque en primeros auxilios fuera un aficionado.


El joven estaba algo amargado
la chica estaba peor de lo que había pensado
se quitó su suéter anaranjado
e hizo presión en la herida que había encontrado.


La dama tenía todo el cuerpo amoratado
su cuerpo se estaba poniendo helado
su teléfono lo dejó en casa por estar apurado
no había ni una casa ni un alma cerca se sentía conmocionado.


La noche parecía eterna el joven estaba cansado,
ya había pasado un rato y la víctima no había reaccionado
se sentía realmente asqueado
porque en el fondo sabía que al final no había ayudado.


Hizo lo que pudo pero la joven lo había dejado
jamás reaccionó, su cuerpo estaba acabado
el hombre derramó lágrimas de enojo y enfado
"¿por qué demonios me he escapado?"


El joven volvió a casa desconsolado
no encontró lo que había buscado
llamó a emergencias y explicó lo que había pasado
no le comentó nada a su madre, estaba triste y avergonzado.


La experiencia que tuvo lo dejo anonadado
no pudo hacer más que ducharse y tumbarse en la cama agotado,
quizás si no se hubiera involucrado,
habría hecho por fin las pases con su padre que según él siempre lo había amado.

At the beginning of that night one could smell the sin
a young man from his house had escaped
out the window of the laundry room
he went in search of someone from his sad past.


As he walked along he noticed a car that looked abandoned,
it was in the middle of the street and not parked.
the young man approached it curiously but with stealth, he was crouched down.
He was startled to see a bloody woman with her seat belt still fastened.


The car was very old-fashioned
one of the tires was dented
the driver's door was on its side
The whole thing was very suspicious, I wouldn't have gone near it.


The young man was really scared
he kept his distance from the blood he wasn't used to
the body was motionless as if it was turned off
but the hesitant young man would not come closer he was very terrified.


He gathered his courage and approached very carefully,
with trembling hands he unbuckled the tightly fastened belt.
unbuckled the belt, which was too tight,
then he put his hands to his mouth in alarm at the sight of a dagger
to see a blood-drenched, razor-sharp dagger.


The young man was sweating profusely in anguish,
he had to look everywhere for the wound
for the wound that had been inflicted,
he would try to help her even though he was an amateur in first aid.


The young man was somewhat bitter
the girl was worse than he had thought
he took off his orange sweater
and put pressure on the wound he had found.


The lady was bruised all over
her body was getting cold
her phone was left at home because she was in a hurry
there wasn't a house or a soul around he felt shocked.


The night seemed to go on forever the young man was tired,
it had been a while and the victim hadn't reacted.
he felt really disgusted
because deep down he knew that in the end he had not helped.


He did what he could, but the young woman had left him.
she never reacted, her body was finished
The man shed tears of anger and rage.
"why the hell did I run away?"


The young man returned home disconsolate
he did not find what he had been looking for
called 911 and explained what had happened.
He did not tell his mother anything, he was sad and ashamed.


The experience he had left him dumbfounded.
He could do nothing but take a shower and lie in bed exhausted,
perhaps if he hadn't gotten involved,
Perhaps if he had not gotten involved, he would have finally made peace with his father who he said had always loved him.

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It must have been a gruesome sight for him...what was worse was that he wasn't able to save the bleeding woman..what had happened to her??...it's still a mystery..glad the young finally had a rethink and went back home

Hi there! You are totally right, it must have been super hard for him being in such situation, and about the woman in the car that was the idea to keep it as a mystery. Thanks a lot for your comment.