Holy shit! Now that was a pretty gripping story! I absolutely loved the entire plot, pacing, and narrative form of the fiction!
The whole thing seemed so realistic that i believe could actually work well on the big screen if adapted into a movie someday!
Voodoo/Black Magic, as most might already know, is a common practice usually associated with the African culture and as a result of that whole conflict between the protagonists Grandmother and the white men, I just couldn't help but picture the story's setting during the times of the Colonial Masters.
Very good story my friend, kept me invested throughout!