Good God! If it wasn't for the few notes you left at the end, I would've totally believed this was your own personal experience!
This was so we'll written!
I won't lie though, some parts were hard to read. I mean, it gets kinda violent but overall a great Story.
It is true that Ning suffered a great deal because of her family and I can totally sympathize with her. However, the guilt of killing her mother will surely haunt for a while.
Hopefully she learns to forgive herself someday... I can certainly forgive her.
Ahh... Is there anything more undying like a mother...
Darkness is something that we all have, so writing from a dark or a light place is easy for me.
I guess there is nothing more undying than a mother and daughter love.