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RE: [Writing Contest] Finish the Tale. My past life

The story is really exciting! It gives you goosebumps from beginning to end. The concept of a train that won't stop until it remembers its past life is unique and mysterious.

The most nerve-wracking part is when the countdown appears on the letter and the train window. The ending is also great—it turns out there's unfinished business from the past. It leaves you wondering what happens next.

The writing is easy to read and the atmosphere is spot on. It feels like you're riding the mysterious train yourself...!

Nice story...! 👍

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Thank you so much! :)

!BBH