[Esp/Ing] Micro story contest 6th edition by Hivemexico and Monster-one. Elisa the Mad

in Cervantes3 years ago


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They remember her... they said.

Yes, the three of them knew Elisa and remembered how little by little she lost her sanity, reading the plaque recently made in her honor in the square where she used to feed pigeons and then go sweeping with a kind of broom made with some branches.

Yes, she was remembered by all, as the crazy Elisa, there were few who really knew her story, as one day after a collision she just fell into dementia.

For years she lived in the streets of the Cardenal de Bermudez square, although she was crazy in her dementia, she was in charge of keeping the square clean.

After more than twenty years she never came to clean, the streets and the square lost color day by day, nobody ever noticed her presence until one day she was no longer there, she died because of her prolonged dementia.

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La recuerdan... dijeron ellos.

Si ellos tres conocieron a Elisa y recordaban, como poco a poco fue perdiendo la cordura, leyendo la placa recién hecha en su honor en la plaza donde ella solía alimentar palomas para luego irse barriendo con una especie de escoba hecha con algunas ramas.

Si, ella era recordaba por todos, como la loca Elisa, ya quedaban pocos que supieran realmente su historia, como un día luego de un choque ella sin mas cayo en la demencia.

Ella por años vivió en las calles de la plaza Cardenal de Bermúdez aunque estaba loca en su demencia se encargaba de mantener la plaza limpia.

Luego de algo mas de veinte años sin mas no vino a limpiar, las calles y la plaza día a día perdieron color, nadie nunca noto su presencia hasta que un día ya no estaba, murió por causa de su tan prolongada demencia.

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😔Muy lindo relato....parece que estos personajes anónimos, o conocidos como Elisa, de los parques marcan la vida de todos de alguna u otra forma. Suerte en el concurso!