I'm confused as to whether you meant to say "twin brother" in the 3rd to the last paragraph.
Howbeit,it's a nicely written story,BIM especially awed by your consistency while using the present tense. Not so many writers achieve that easily.
I think that Kira shouldn't be running away but to face her fears. That's the only way she's ever getting out of the trauma she's in.
Thanks for commenting and reading. I'm learning to write, it's good to know I'm on a good path.