Beautiful, first of all, I noticed the rhyme and it was rhythmic to a particular extent. I'm a lover of rhyme and it's not easy fusing them together really
In the introduction of the poem, I noticed a sort of paradox but the whole idea is to like well talk about speaking in place of disdaining silence. It was beautiful and catchy.
a promise of fell peace,
of otherworldly bliss,
I loved the repetition, it was there in the beginning and also there in the end and that encouraged me to like, focus more on its intent, it's effect too. All round, it's a really beautiful piece. Wow.