A superb penning. You illustrate well the futility but odd attraction some have for battle and violence.
I adored the enjambment.
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A superb penning. You illustrate well the futility but odd attraction some have for battle and violence.
I adored the enjambment.
Thank you, it's been a while I wrote one of these piece. I love using those enjambments, it makes for a free flow of the ideas. Maybe i'll write some more.