can i nitpick? :D
at 0:45 you started backing up the camera, i would give it just a sec more so we get to see the monitors (you see them but you need to watch several times) and than cut to closeup of them. first watch i was like how did we get here.
nice one overall.
Haha, yes you may. Yea the main reason for that quick cut out is because the shot after next would have almost been the exact same shot if I would have let things square up, and that felt weird.
I wanted to just have the screens break the top of the frame and cut so you'd know how you got there, but I guess it wasn't long enough for you to catch it on the first couple watches. I'll try to do better next time :p
and you should take that as from someone who kinda don't know what he is talking about :D
i like when people tell me all the things they think it could be better, but people don't do that. i mean there is always a way to make something better.