The problem with your writing is the consistent inconsistencies whenever you're referring to something or someone. You refer to Leos then switch to Laios. Some parts of your paragraphs felt like it was written by AI when it suddenly became good but on some parts I can see there a switch from personal to impersonal writing. The way you switch back from retelling your point of view versus trying to sell the story from a third person.
I've been noticing these patterns recurring and just didn't mind them at first since English isn't your primary language, but that's really not the point here, what is it that you're trying to accomplish whenever you're writing about anime?