Freewrite - The dangerous truth

in Freewriters5 years ago (edited)

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With his ear pressed tightly against the cold door, Mark listened to the hushed tones as the two women inside the room confided in each other.
It was difficult to hear perfectly, but he could hear enough to know it was true.

Woman often have this innate ability to share everything from the banal to the life changing with each other in a way men can't always grasp. The conversation that Mark was secretly privy to fell in the latter category. His mouth slowly fell ajar as he listened ever more intently.

"There was no other choice. He was going to leave me. My baby was going to leave me, so I gave him what he always wanted" she said with tears in her eyes.

"But you're not pregnant Lucy! When he finds out, he'll hit the roof, surely you know that? He'll pack his bags and be gone for good"

"H-h-he won't leave. He loves me" Lucy pleaded in a way that didn't even convince herself.

Mark's ear was red now and he had heard enough. It was time to go before they sensed his presence. The information he had could destroy one life, but save another. He had a decision to make. He'd have to move quickly. Time was of the essence now.

Some sudden movement behind him startled him, as he heard a door creak shut. The lock turned and then footsteps echoed down the hall. The reality hit him quickly. He was trapped.

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This was my interpretation of the freewrite for prompt word "Pregnant"

Let me know if you want me to continue the story with another prompt when time allows.

What is a Freewrite you say....

It's a daily writing contest organised by @mariannewest. She has been doing this for more than three years now! Well done for keeping it going.

Want to get involved?

Head on over to:

https://hive.blog/hive-161155/@mariannewest/day-1252-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-pregnant

What to do for a freewrite

Look at the theme. Set a 5 minute timer and just write. Whatever comes to mind. Just go with it... it's like a stream of consciousness.

Thanks for stopping by.

The gif/image is not mine. It was published here: https://tenor.com/view/listening-attention-door-eavesdropping-dean-gif-12572277

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The moving picture made this very special ... now I want to know what happened to Mark! Well done!

Thanks a million. Glad you liked it 🙂

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So, that picture is from a serie Supernatural, which I am sure you did not watch because you aren't a woman. I did 😁 because of my woman, and I actually enjoyed it.

Regarding your freewriting, can I order something from you?

I want a 1000 words about... Overgrown house, abandoned

I just want more of your writings buddy! Also shout out to @mariannewest that I'm adding to my friend list of course!

You know something, you're right!! I didn't know that's where the gif was from! But thanks for reminding me, as I'd forgotten to mention that the image was not mine - fixed now 👍

Ah cool, thanks for the writing idea man!! I'll def take you up on that. Leave it with me and I'll tag youbon it when I post it.

Cheers for the reblog as well.

Thanks dude! I just love read your stuffs! The reblog is well deserved, great writing as usual!