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I am writing for you, my feelings,
capturing in letters what the soul feels.
You pierce my being with your warm breath,
losing my gaze, impatient.
In a unique way you envelop my passion,
without needing to touch you, you burn inside me.
I see you reflected in every composition,
believing in your existence, with fervent ardour.
hmm without needing to touch you, you burn me inside. Thats just a good line. Welldone. This is a beautiful composition
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And yet this feels lacking.
Words, thought ever so thoroughly in mind— couldn't be written ever so easily.
Nor can it ever be spoken fluently.
And so I find myself craving.
This one's good, but I can't help looking for more. Keep it up, and maybe... finish the story too? Has its potential nonetheless.
I no longer need to voice out the void inside my heart for what I feel no longer needs a voice but a hand that writes.
When our words become one with us, it reflects what we feel inside our hearts. That's why, we do not write tales without having to feel it deep within us because only then will our story becomes true.
Thanks for sharing your composition @alexandercanela. You really have a great way of expressing your feelings. That's amazing! 🥰👏