So many memorable lines here!
This especially speaks to me:
I'd call you
Eternal but you're finite as
Laughter, two hands holding,
Music, two songs dancing.
And I, "simple as sin" - it's all musical as well as memorable.
So many memorable lines here!
This especially speaks to me:
I'd call you
Eternal but you're finite as
Laughter, two hands holding,
Music, two songs dancing.
And I, "simple as sin" - it's all musical as well as memorable.
Thank you so much. This from you means a lot. Thank you.
I was attempting as much to create the sense of music in the poem. It is a love poem which I am not good at.
Not good at--?
You're kidding, right? This is an epic love poem!
🥰😍 thank you @carolkean