A startling twist at the end. It came out of nowhere, a bit like Graham, but it works; it's entirely plausible given our context, and almost unsurprising because of how much we've heard of this kind of thing lately. I suppose it's not surprising at all for women. Good story. Now I can say that your stories are as good as your comments. :)
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That's very kind of you! As a fellow freewriter, you know how these stories just sort of "happen" as one goes along. I didn't know where this one was going, either, until it got there.