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Help me find a way
Thought I found a way
sun flowers and red roses
let it lay the path
into your deep
My hopes are someday
I would touch your heart
phasing into you
cascading into you
your love, crashing over me
the overview is magesterial
Following your light trails in this maze
is my gateway to love
my fear is missing out on my destination
stretch your hands of poise
Help me find a way
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I liked the imagery used in these lines.
"phasing into you
cascading into you
your love, crashing over me"
They lend great power to the metaphor.
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Very interesting your poem, with sensory images that allow to feel the longing expressed and precise and simple verses (maybe verse #11 doesn't help much). Greetings, @dante31.
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