hehehehe this was so much fun!!!! and now... you are unleashed as a writer hahahaha
Your imagination soared as high as Daelin took you! hehehehe
I love all the little nuances in the story- that's what always makes it so interesting to me - little things like the teacher yelling, feeding him meatloaf, and setting up monthly visits for the future hehehehe
awesome!!! so great of a read! hehehehe