You really put the tension into those lines because it's not clear until the end that he's waiting for a baby to arrive. Great story ππ!
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You really put the tension into those lines because it's not clear until the end that he's waiting for a baby to arrive. Great story ππ!
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It's hard trying to fit a whole idea into such a small space, but it's fun seeing if it works or not. π