Bring Some New View

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Bring Some New View

The sun is shining again
a man's getting fresh air
the wind waving his hair
there's nothing to explain

A paradise before him
thousands of birds sing
greenish pumping plains
cotton-clouded skies reign

He just stands up there
being one with land
an endless painting to stare
and absorb barehand

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This is lovely. A perfect scene, beautifully evoked.

Years ago I went to a hypnotist for pain. He would tell me to imagine the most peaceful place I could remember. That place was like your poem. Quiet. Next to a field, under trees, with a stream nearby.

He just stands up there
being one with land

That's what it felt like.

Thanks for your nice comment, @agmoore.

Nature often heals us in ways anything else can. I am glad my poem made you remind that relieving experience.