What a nice piece and a slice of perfection you describe in this...fiction, dream, wish of yours. As a bona fide caveman I' can only say one word:
This is totally legit.
Ok, that's technically four words, but if you focus on the operative word being legit it's one.
A nice piece.
A few concise words of praise from a bonafide caveman ought to be always well received.
Fiction is just another edge of reality. I allow myself to dream, and I enjoy every second of it as if it has happened already.
Thank you for taking the time to read my post and to leave a legit comment! Glad you liked this little freewrite.
Your writing is a pleasure to read.